Green Sweetness
Green Sweetness (limerick) Take it tenderly in your hand Cut it in two halves and With a spoon you'll eat Its heart, it's sweet The kiwi of New Zealand.
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~ heyyyyyy.....now THIS is something special Mireille, I've only ever written one limerick, it's a form that I'm not good at but you've done a great job on this one, and I LOVE the subject matter... I...
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There once was a woman from Par eeeeee who thought she would eat a kiwi so she took a chance, then started to dance the haka just like a Maori Beep Beep
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Thank you very much Sash. you're sweeter than these fruits. Limericks aren't much my thing either, they don't belong my culture.
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RFLMAO !! Andy ! You crack me up ! Here the Haka is called French Cancan, lol ! Thank you very much *hugs*
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Speaking of the Haka reminds me of me showing a video of a football game between Australia and New Zealand in a sportsmans bar in Indi quite a few years ago now. The locals were most impressed by the...
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Was it Aussie football ? because, that's sure it's a fight. The Haka is always impressive, above all when made by those "little babies" that are the rugby players, lol ! Thanks for stopping by, Teagan.
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Bravo. Stand up and take a bow. I just luvs Kiwi fruit, and I just LUVS your Tanka. I swear that I'm going to try writing one. But I have a whole lot of trouble writing short forms. I think it's...
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limericks have often baffled me in writing form but you have taken a delicious fruit and painted it well in this style mir! lorrha
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Lol ! Jeri.. this limerick is not much longer than a tanka, sure, tho, tankas are easier to write (even for longwinded pens, lol !) Thank you.
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I'm like you Lorrha, I love limericks because of the fun, but to write them is another story, lol ! Thank you.
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